A perspective from Peter Richardson

Last night I read my short story at Leeds Writers Circle and received some useful feedback. The story was well liked and I came away greatly encouraged. The story is now at the top of my pile for sending off for publication or for competitions.

I also came away with 24 copies of my story with most containing scribbles. The scribbled thoughts and ideas were remarkably helpful.

Four typos were spotted and I made three changes to the story’s layout. But what was most remarkable was that I have now made 28 changes to the wording. None of that has changed the story, but each one has sharpened and improved it. Each one was either suggested by someone at the Circle or was in response to a question someone posed.

Often people highlight sentences that if I am honest, I know are not quite right. Other times the suggestion is totally new to me. Sometimes I read a suggestion and am not sure I agree. Then I pick up another scribbled sheet and see the same suggestion. After the third or fourth time, I’m convinced that those reading the story have a better perspective than me!

People disagree with each other. One person highlights a sentence they like. Another person calls it repetitive. It’s great to see this difference and it helps me reflect on what I’m aiming for.

Sometimes I don’t make the changes that are suggested. That’s my privilege as the author. But even in those cases I am forced to consider why the reader sees things differently than me.

So thanks. To everyone who spoke or scribbled. I now have a much better story. All I need to do now is find a better title.